Today's guest is LK Hunsaker, friend and fellow author whom I plan to kidnap one day and take with me to a writer's conference, preferably somewhere warm. Until then, we'll just have to find our "steam" in our writing, LOL. LK makes a great point, in that who we are as people is not necessarily reflected in our characters -- more often we write about who we wish we were, or wish we could be...or take the best (and maybe sometimes the worst) characteristics of those around us and bring them to life...but that's the beauty of writing...we can make our characters be anyone we want them to be. And LK has some special characters she wants to share with us today, characters sharing a very special moment, exploring the power and beauty of human touch, so sit back and enjoy. I know after reading this and other excerpts from Moondrops & Thistles, this exceptional story has moved to the top of my TBR pile. Welcome, LK!
Hello Liana! It’s so nice to come and play today. :-)
While I was trying to come up with something decently creative to post here that I haven’t already said or answered, one of the followers for my blog contest in relation to the tour had a suggestion of a possible topic of discussion:
“I'm waiting for you to reveal something about what inspires you to write the "steamy" parts!”
Now granted, my steamy parts (and I do mean in my books) are not all that steamy. I’m more an inward-looking psychological writer. I’m more mental than touch-feely and to tell the truth, I’m not big on hugs, personally. I have characters who love hugs. And I do like virtual hugs because it sometimes is the thought that counts! And that’s where my steamy parts come in.
How many of you have caught view of the “perfect” man or woman, visually perfect according to your personal taste, and wondered what it would be like to actually touch that person’s face? Has anyone not ever done that? Yes, it’s okay if you’re in a permanent relationship and still do it. From my psych training I fully remember that fantasy is a perfectly normal and very healthy part of life, whatever your status. It can even improve your long-term marriage to fantasize. It’s good for you! It can also be good for your partner, because let’s face it, when you’re happier, your partner is likely to be happier.
I’ve read author interviews where the writer says her heroes are based on her husband. I find it incredibly sweet. I also find it a little too personal for me. Nope, I might grab a few of my husband’s personality traits, such as with Daws and his ability to handle any job that’s thrown at him, which has always had my unfailing admiration, but when it comes to the steamy stuff ... that stays separate.
My personal life and my work are both joined and separate. My fiction is me and yet it’s not.
The steamy parts come from basic biology and the fact that touch is an incredible adrenaline rush as well as a mental stabilizer. Wow, did I just throw ice on the whole romance writing thing? Okay, so it comes from when I read a tender scene or watch one in a movie or see that “perfect” type somewhere and feel the mental rush of possibility, of pulse racing, of “what if,” of how it would feel to touch his face, just once of course. Yes, face touching is prevalent in my books. Sometimes it goes beyond that.
In real life, I would never touch a strange man’s face, regardless of how perfect he is physically. That’s where fiction comes in. Fantasy is healthy. Why else would romance be the #1 best selling genre year after year?
I hope Liana won’t mind that I got so steamy on her blog, but it is appropriate, since she was kind enough to read through my first real love scene, written for Moondrops & Thistles: shorter & spicier edition, and okay it before it went out.
I’m going to leave you with a lead in to that scene. Be sure to leave a comment for a chance to win an ebook of Moondrops short & spicy! And go to my blog next for a chance to win the full print version, personally signed, plus a transforming mug with the cover art, and a Support Our Troops bracelet: http://lkhunsaker.blogspot.com
Moondrops & Thistles: shorter & spicier edition
LK Hunsaker
Excerpt:
“What do they do?”
She sighed again. “Mom is the typical homemaker who doesn’t do anything but that. I used to try to get her to do anything else, pick up a craft, play cards with the girls, something. She would never do it. I think because Dad doesn’t want her to do anything else. Can’t tell you how much I resented that she’d let him run her life that way.”
Daws nodded to himself. Made sense. Explained her insistence about being independent, not allowing him to “take charge” as though he might want to. “What does he do?”
“Oh. He lays floors. Or used to. He’s retired now. He also did some cement work. Things like that. And he took care of animals now and then. That changed with the year. We had chickens for a while, goats, turkeys, peacocks that made the most dreadful noise, and a couple of horses he tried to breed but they didn’t seem to like each other much.”
He chuckled. “Man of many interests.”
“Man who couldn’t commit to one thing. Drove Mom crazy.”
“And you.”
She looked up at him, questioning.
“That why you’re determined to stick this job out, like it or not?”
“No.” She turned her eyes forward again, down at the sidewalk. “I’m sticking it out because it’s the one thing I’ve wanted more than anything in the world and I’m not willing to let go of the chance only because a few morons try to stop me.”
By the tone of her voice, Daws decided it was again time to route around. “Have siblings?”
“A few. And I don’t want to try to explain them so how about we let that go?”
“Okay.”
“You’re offended now.”
“Not at all.”
"You sound like you are.” She stopped and faced him. “I left all that behind on purpose. It’s no longer part of me. Of my life. Any more than yours seems to be.”
He studied her eyes. So firm, resolved. Of course she had to know better. Your family roots weren’t ever fully left behind. His weren’t, regardless of how he tried. They never would be. Not enough. “I’m sorry you felt you had to put it behind you.”
“Yeah. Well, it happens.”
Daws raised a hand to her face. “If you ever decide you want to talk about it, I’m always willing to listen. But I’ll understand if you don’t.”
“Will you tell me more about yours?”
“Nothing much more to say about mine.”
“I don’t think I believe that, but I’ll give you the same offer.” Deanna brushed his lips, hinting. “Ready to go in yet or are you still afraid of me?”
“Yes.”
“To which?”
“Both.” With a quick grin, he led her to his building and walked her up the stairs.
As she settled in, he pulled out two hard lemonades and took them to the couch where she sat with bare feet pulled to her side. Deanna accepted one of the bottles, looked at it quizzically, and peered into his eyes.
“Am I right?”
“How did you know? Did I slip up and tell you?”
He gave her another grin, took a long swallow, and rubbed a hand over her shoulder with a light massage.
“Guess it’s true.” She returned the favor by caressing his leg.
“What’s true?”
“You’re not bothered by feet. At least by my bare feet on your couch.”
He caught her eyes as he took another swallow, and set the drink out of his way. “Are you ticklish?” At her raised eyebrows, he clarified. “Your feet.”
“No.”
Daws slid his hands around the leg she had resting atop the other and coerced it gently until her knee bent upward and her foot rested against his leg. He soothed a hand over top. “Can’t imagine anyone bothered by them.”
“Well, it’s not very classy, I guess, to run around the house with bare feet. Not sure why it isn’t since they are clean...” She broke off as he began to massage her foot.
He watched her face to be sure it didn’t tickle and he wasn’t too rough. Her eyes closed, her head dropped back, and her expression ... made his body tighten. It took little encouragement to get her to shift to the end of the couch, allowing access to both feet. And she pried her lemonade between her thighs for security, to prevent spilling it as her body loosened, relaxed.
“That feels incredible.”
“Does it?” He pressed his thumbs up the middle of her feet, watched her breasts rise as her shoulders arched back. The buttons of her blouse pulled against their holes. Her fingers gripped the edge of his couch.
Suddenly, she pulled away, put her bottle on the table, and pressed in against him, her mouth to his, arms around his neck. He tasted the lemonade on her tongue, felt her breasts surge with her breaths. He circled her small waist and encouraged her closer. It took little encouragement. She was fire. Bright. Hot. Piercing his armor of what he thought was thick as Kevlar. She was proving how wrong he was. It wasn’t Kevlar. It was aluminum. Durable. But not unbendable.
Buy Link:
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/31804
(shorter and spicier edition)
https://www.smashwords.com/books/view/71151
(full edition, also at BN.com or at your local indie store from Indiebound.org)
10 comments:
Thanks for having me today, Liana! I'll have to be away from the computer for a bit this afternoon, but I'll be back!
Loraine, what a rich, characterization driven scene. You really get a good sense of Daws and Deanna and what makes them tick. What a nice lead in to the steam. hehe
I get a lot of "is that your husband" in the book and my answer is a resounding no. I've never had the urge to look to him for inspiration. I think 14 yrs as a cop has left him a little jadded and grumpy. LOL!. Maybe if I write a romantic suspense with a cop as the hero I'll draw on the jadded and grumpy.
Good luck with "Moondrops and Thistles." I love the name BTW.
Smiles
Steph
Shoot, everybody knows steam comes from the heat. And everybody has heat, whether they'll admit it out loud or not. LK had a great excerpt here. It held my attention from start to finish. And there are few things in this world better than a well done foot massage. Daws rocks!
great excerpt, Made me want to read the rest of the book. Yummy.
Barbara
Loraine, what a lovely scene. I didn't find it steamy per say, but tender and sensaul, realistic and promising so much. I love foot massage. Glad I have the book. I'll start reading soon.
Steph, LOL! We could probably all pull bits of that from our spouses. ;-) Thank you!
Maggie, to tell you the truth, I wouldn't let anyone give me a foot massage. Way too ticklish!
Heat is good. :-)
Barbara, glad you enjoyed the scene. :-)
Mona, I'll be glad to hear your thoughts. And it does get a little steamier... ;-)
Barbara, congrats! You won the Moondrops ebook. :-)
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